I don't think I could give you a good assessment with what I have to work with here. The outlining seems nice, but there isn't enough dialogue for me to really latch on to and understand the setting and story.
So I say go for it!
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I don't think I could give you a good assessment with what I have to work with here. The outlining seems nice, but there isn't enough dialogue for me to really latch on to and understand the setting and story.
So I say go for it!
I don't know why, but the sucking sound really did me in.
This is a really cool animation! I was really impressed with the changes in perspective. One issue I have is that the audio seems to have a little bit of clipping going on. I don't know if you can hear the slight crackling like I do, but that's usually indicative of an issue with the quality or db's of the track.
It's really easy for me to overlook though because the music itself is cool and mysterious enough to add to the atmosphere of the animation. I really like it!
Thanks for the feedback! The audio is lower quality because of the rendering but in the finalized version it won't be.
Truly humbled to have played a small part in this amazing work of art.
Just an FYI, this game is actually playable on desktop too.
You're right, but best experience is on phone due resolution I used and way controls were thought
Really fun game! Sunk about half an hour into this trying to get past the third level. Wish I was better at these vertical shooters. This is a good one for sure!
Glad you're enjoying it! If you're having trouble maybe try picking different upgrades. You can increase your max lives if you upgrade the ship hull. :)
Interesting piece! There are so many different elements going on here, and I'm always going to give respect to creativity. That being said, I didn't have the best of times navigating the theme here. Individually, the instruments are very catchy and would likely invoke thoughts of driving during the rain, dancing, or perhaps…the night (!) depending on which one you choose to focus on. Together though, I get the feeling of ambivalence. If that was the idea, then my bad!
Composition-wise, it sounds like you're able to make a lot work with little variation. There seems to be a bass line and one melody following closely along, both of which anchor the rest of the track while the DnB-style drums are providing the spontaneity. Stylistically, I think it's great, and I've enjoyed a lot of tracks from this site that have that type of foundation.
In most cases, however, I would personally look to have the drums be a little more subdued from a production point of view. The 16th-style rhythm, fills, and cutoffs/cut-ins are excellent. That type of contrast from the "calmer" instruments give a lot of personality. Yet, I would wonder how it might sound if the volume was tucked a little bit more in the mix, or if I shaved some of the decay off the snare and added reverb. Because while having contrasting styles is awesome, you usually have to walk a fine line to make it work.
Anyways, these were just some thoughts I had while browsing the undiscovered artists section. This one stood out to me…in a good way!
Thank you so much for the advice but I've been making music only for a year so I dont how to do everything yet.
This one goes out to all the people who have no business wearing crop tops
That was a really sweet F5 at the end. The vocal layering fits in really well when it's nested in the instrumentation.
Note to self: the flu can add moodiness to tracks.
Thanks! That's actually my favorite vocal lick. I think I hid it somewhere in GRIST with @SkankyMojo.
My goal was to use as much range as I could musically, and see if the flu rasp sounded good. I think the answer is clear. Now whenever I get sick I'm going to spend less time complaining and more time recording lol
Also, do you have perfect pitch?!
I've been looking at this for a few days now, and while I can't explain every aspect of the picture, the overall mood of something that was once pure and cherishable is now being corrupted really jumps out at me. The dead birds, the leg and hair becoming tainted by some sort of black, amorphous entity; it all seems to reflect something good coming under attack and losing, very gradually. Even the red tones around the girl's face and neck seem to imply that something incredibly sinister is assaulting her and the environment around her.
I don't think I've looked into any sort of Newgrounds work of art like this is an incredibly long time. Absolutely spectacular.
Awesome detail for a tattoo! What part of the body is it going on I wonder?
the upper arm :D
Best Meta-Human in the game!
Woah! Yeah!
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